Well I'll be damned
It started off a little... iffy for me. However, I quickly changed my mind as the song progressed, the melody though repetitive is quite cool, and the bassline is pretty sweet, though with a better bass synth it would have been pretty damn sweet through my headphones(which are pretty good ones). I like the break and second half of the song is pretty powerful, I liked it alot man! I have to say though, that this reminded me a whole lot of this video game I used to play on NES called Bionic Commando. The melody is very reminiscent to me. Anyway, great job on this!
P.S. I saw your advertisement on the audio BBS, and read about you being desperate. Hehe, I know exactly how you feel man, because I'm quite desperate to get people to listen to my music as well. I feel that I get overlooked by people on the audio portal, because my songs get their scores lowered pretty badly by zero voters, and I recently haven't been getting as many consistent reviews as I have in the past. But hey man, I'm going to watch you, and I'll try my best to review as many of your songs as I possibly can, you've earned a new fan with this song! If you don't mind listening to my songs, you will more than have returned the favor. Good work again man!
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