Well slap my ass and call me susan...
This is pretty damn awesome!
Now I don't know if I would put this in industrial(haha just got to the key change, very nice!)because I feel it should be dirtier/heavier; this reminds me a bit of my song Molecular Level, or maybe even Schizophrenic, but far more melodic. I really dig your style in this piece, it was very interesting and something I don't hear. However, I feel the snares were underpowered. Oh well, great breaks, beautiful melodies, and I really like your transitions, which is what I feel I'm the worst at. I'll have to check you out more often... if this is the preview then I can't wait for the final!
-ac-